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Friday, August 31, 2018

Writing - Learing blog

So this week we have been doing writing and it's about an ice palace 
we had to make ideas about like ice and snow
after that, we said about what the ice palace looks
so we picked what is a good one out of 3
ad picked the one for ideas about the ice palace and you make a story
we have a lot more to do but this is what I have done so far

Turn your face into the east wind, and if you could see forever you would see Ivan’s land. It is a land where the green grass cover in the shining snow and the falling snowflakes. As the snowflake disappeared as it hit the ground with the shining snow. As Ivan steps on the crunchy soft snow, it breaks quietly like a
The cold wind touched his checks. Ivan is a boy with brown short hair and warm clothes on. His hands go numb and his breaths in and goes “brrrrrrrrrrr” as it's cold. The cold wind hit the trees howling like a wolf. A snowflake dropped on his check and it melted down his check.
It's a place where is no happiness, where you want to leave and you hate it.
As the wind blows on his face, he shivered.I t was cold, frozen and covered in the big pile of snow.
The wind always hits, shakes, freezes and kills

But Ivans doesn't mind the cold because he has been in it for a long time

Friday, August 24, 2018