WRITING

To get better at our writing the teacher has made us character slide so we can make our story better, we got this thing what you push and it makes a character for you can so this is mine 

first, the one that you push the button and it makes you a character

Shrek is very aggressive, judgemental, she hates everyone and her teeth are very yellow and fuzzy. She is very foolish and bad mannered. Shrek is greedy, harsh and bossy. She lives in Turkey. she moves stubbled and eagerly. If anyone talks to her she punches them in the face. her hair is very dirty and she smells like she hasn't showered in a year. She wears old dirty bags. She has a pet goat. her hobbies are swimming in swamps

after that, you have to make a setting and make up your own character

and here's my story

Walking the street in turkey smelling rotten egg smell, and the roasting sun on my shoulder. I stubbornly walked into the shade. The wind hollowed dagging the rotten smell closer. Her grumpy voice hollowed into the wind, she dragged her leg across the road, she got across and sat grumpily and stubbornly, waiting for the time to go past.

this is my favourite hope you like it 

READING FOLLOW UP

We do reading follow up and we have to do lots of it, but this one I am proud of so I will be showing you guys it

I did it with my friends Nikita
this what the activity is

 so we did a youtube video
here it is

I have to link it because it's not letting me put it on  here it is 

Narrative

So we did a test on narrative writing and I made my one into a flipbook so the website is called: filpsnack , and here is the link to my writing click here, it's really cool because you can make your own book 

10 MINUTE WRITING CHALLENGE!!!!1

Algebro

Writing - Learing blog

So this week we have been doing writing and it's about an ice palace 
we had to make ideas about like ice and snow
after that, we said about what the ice palace looks
so we picked what is a good one out of 3
ad picked the one for ideas about the ice palace and you make a story
we have a lot more to do but this is what I have done so far

Turn your face into the east wind, and if you could see forever you would see Ivan’s land. It is a land where the green grass cover in the shining snow and the falling snowflakes. As the snowflake disappeared as it hit the ground with the shining snow. As Ivan steps on the crunchy soft snow, it breaks quietly like a

The cold wind touched his checks. Ivan is a boy with brown short hair and warm clothes on. His hands go numb and his breaths in and goes “brrrrrrrrrrr” as it's cold. The cold wind hit the trees howling like a wolf. A snowflake dropped on his check and it melted down his check.

It's a place where is no happiness, where you want to leave and you hate it.

As the wind blows on his face, he shivered.I t was cold, frozen and covered in the big pile of snow.

The wind always hits, shakes, freezes and kills

But Ivans doesn't mind the cold because he has been in it for a long time

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