Hi Grace, I'm Nika from st Bernadette's School. I enjoyed how you spread out the text, and use a size that is easy to read. You could improve this by checking your spelling. What's your favorite colour?
Hi Grace B my name is Sanele from st Bernadette's I like the way you put a good background so we can see the text clearly. I thought that it was wonderful seeing to trying. Something helpful is just to put capital letters and maybe fix your spelling. Also I think you should put more questions e.g Whats your favourite food. god bless look forward to seeing more of your lovely work.
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Hi Grace, I'm Nika from st Bernadette's School. I enjoyed how you spread out the text, and use a size that is easy to read. You could improve this by checking your spelling. What's your favorite colour?
ReplyDeleteHi Grace B my name is Sanele from st Bernadette's I like the way you put a good background so we can see the text clearly. I thought that it was wonderful seeing to trying. Something helpful is just to put capital letters and maybe fix your spelling. Also I think you should put more questions e.g Whats your favourite food.
ReplyDeletegod bless look forward to seeing more of your lovely work.