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Thursday, June 29, 2017

hockey Zones

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  1. AnonymousJuly 3, 2017 at 10:55 AM

    Hi Grace,
    My name is Mikaela and I'm a year 6 student at St. Bernadette's School. I like how you had lots of photos of you and your hockey team at zones, I think your hockey uniform looks smart. I like how you explained how long the hockey game lasted. Also my school used to do hockey for winter sports. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation and make sure everything makes sense. Is this your first time going to zones ?

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    1. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 10:20 AM

      Hi Milkaela this was my first time going to hockey zones. thanks and net i make it makes sense and use punctation

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  2. UnknownSeptember 1, 2017 at 9:46 AM

    Hello Grace!

    Maybe next time I think you could make it make more sense and add punctuation. Apart from that it makes perfect sense!

    Make sure you pick fonts that are easy to read and colours that match!

    Did you have fun??? Did your friends go with you???

    He whetu koe! (Your a star!)
    Katelynn (Mamamku 1 Grey Main School)

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