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Monday, September 24, 2018

WRITING

To get better at our writing the teacher has made us character slide so we can make our story better, we got this thing what you push and it makes a character for you can so this is mine 

first, the one that you push the button and it makes you a character
Shrek is very aggressive, judgemental, she hates everyone and her teeth are very yellow and fuzzy. She is very foolish and bad mannered. Shrek is greedy, harsh and bossy. She lives in Turkey. she moves stubbled and eagerly. If anyone talks to her she punches them in the face. her hair is very dirty and she smells like she hasn't showered in a year. She wears old dirty bags. She has a pet goat. her hobbies are swimming in swamps



after that, you have to make a setting and make up your own character
and here's my story
Walking the street in turkey smelling rotten egg smell, and the roasting sun on my shoulder. I stubbornly walked into the shade. The wind hollowed dagging the rotten smell closer. Her grumpy voice hollowed into the wind, she dragged her leg across the road, she got across and sat grumpily and stubbornly, waiting for the time to go past.

this is my favourite hope you like it 

1 comment:

  1. Hello Grace

    I am Kaia from Kawakawa primary school and i really liked the way you made it rhyme. Next time you should check your writing after grumpily and stubbornly it says waiting without a capital. I really liked your writing. Thanks Kaia

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