Kia Ora,
I'm back again with another blog post fr the spring learning journey,
I sadly couldn't do it yesterday as I had a few things on and I wasn't able to do a blog post ,
But For today I have some spare time to do one ,
But hopefully tomorrow I can do more plus next week I can do way more.
I will try to do all of the activities but I may not be able to bt I'll try do a lot of comments aswell
Anyways for today's activity I will be doing :
Ok so thats what im doing and here is the slide:
Thanks for watching / reading.
I hope you enjoyed .
If you did this what country or place would you pick ?
Are you doing the spring Learning Journey ?
Until next time - Bye
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ReplyDeleteHey Grace, its me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey as well, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have included pictures and also included a good amount of information as well. I also like how you have sort of separated the eating times I guess into different slides and you have said what they usually eat. You also said in the first slide for breakfast, they drink a lot of coffee and you also said what type of coffee as well!
This reminds me of how the food in some countries are so different and the things that they consider as nice or normal is different for us and we might consider it differently.
I think that to improve, you could just go through your writing because you did have a mistake in the second slide and also in your blog post as well. (You don't press space before you add a comma!) But apart from that you did a pretty great job!
I think I might do like maybe Mexico or Brazil and yes I am doing the Spring Learning Journey like you!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Thanks for commenting Parwin,
DeleteThanks for all of the feedback
Next time I will go and fix all of my mistakes
Thanks again
Hi grace it is me Mykiala.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have sorted this out it is great.
I think next time you should have a little read thru because at the stated there were a few middle letters missing and I don't think you did that on purpose so I think you should re- read thru.
Yes I am looking forward to your next video.
Anyway.
BYE!!!
Thanks for commenting !
DeleteNext time I will go and fix of my mistakes.
I didn't mean to write those mistakes silly me.
Thanks for commenting again
Bye
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteIts me Alan. I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, I am also doing it.
Great blog post and a cool presentation. And the country you choose was great too. Which country I will choose will be Saudi Arabia.
If you want to make it better if you just wrote some more information about what they eat.
Kind regards
Alan
Hi Alan
DeleteThanks for commenting.
Thanks for the feedback
What did you write on it ?
But thanks anyways
- Bye
Kia Ora Grace,
ReplyDeleteit's Jedi here. I think that you are doing a super job so far, in this years Spring Learning journey. I think that your slide is great; you have awesome pics, and you have described everything just enough.
This reminds me of when I did this activity, except I never go to post it. Because I spent a lot of hard work and time creating this on prezi, then I found out that I couldn't post it on my blog. I was so disappointed.
To improve I think that you should, make the text in slide 2 a little larger. Because it was a bit hard to read. I can't wait to see your next post!
Remember you can present your work in other forms. Like videos, or piktocharts.
-Jedi💜😊🍀
Hi Jedi !
DeleteThanks for feedback.
I will next time put them a bit bigger because I went back it was kind of hard to read.
Plus Ill put it into different thing.
Thanks again
- Grace
Hello grace its me Renae.
ReplyDeleteThis post is great.The slide is great and I like the photos you used.
Maybe next time you could tell us facts about the foods and drinks.
And read thru your sentences because I came along this sentences. I will try to do all of the activities but I may not be able to bt I'll try do a lot of comments aswell because some words aren't really words.Anyway great post Bye
Renae
Hi Renae.
DeleteThanks for commenting.
plus could you maybe explain more about some words aren't really words.
Thanks again
Bye