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Kia Ora,

For the last 2 Tuesdays we have been learning about how to make quality blog comments,

We went to the Uru Manuka Website and clicked on lesson one, there is different activities for different people. I am in the confident one and there are two others on the site.

I am in a group with Mia & Abby...

We learnt about: Learning, Impact, Editing, Layout and then rewriting comments that don't have all the Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful and improving it.

We also have a checklist, you check off in the box next to the activity, the activtes are the ones in the slides that we have to do.

We watched lots of videos that relate to the activity.

Here is some of the comments we improved as a group:

This was one of four comments that we made,

The reflection: I think this activity was super fun to do and learn more about more to improve the comments, adding more information into them as well as the positive, thoughtful and helpful, it was a good because we got to refresh our minds on the comments and remember some of the things we might have forgotten, I liked improving the comments because it fun to see the differences in our improved comments to the original.

Did you like our improved comment?

Until next time.....

Bye