FREE WRITE

Kia Ora!
I did this writing last term and never got to post it on my blog,
So today I'm going to be posting it on my blog!
I'm excited to start blogging again and posting more often !
This writing is about the rain in the forest , but I won't give too much information so you can read more !
This was really fun to write , and I enjoyed making up some of it
I didn't finished so it's still in work and i'm still writing in it, So please comment what the ending can be? Or can you guess the end?
I feel like I have been successful in this because of the ISPACE and the idetail and how many words I have wrote.
This story was based off a movie I saw I think it's called "RAIN" I'm not too sure but sorry if I am .
This is before the story is edited because i'm still writing as you know, so there may be a few errors .
I hope you enjoy and I hope you can enjoy and comment!



ENJOY!

The rain in the forest

     Dear Mum, Today was the scariest day of my life and  couldn't tell you. Firstly I will explain what happened but first you're probably thinking I went into the forest and a scary monster and I ran but no , this is a bit more information of the voices in the forest. It will started as I was exploring the forest next to the lake. I was the girl in the bubble I didn't want trouble , but for one time I broke the rules and went over the spark france. I was climbing and climbing to the top and I my heart was pumped and my chest was screaming. My nose was running . I climbed over the fence , I even left a note to dad “ Dear dad I’m just going to the forest I'll be back, well maybe “ Dad was at work . He was always at work and I always just st so I did a change . As I was in the forest I felt free and the leaves crushed as I walked proudly , I walked to the tree and sat down. I felt free for onest , I felt the closest to my mum I believe you're up there.  I started to walk and I hear the worst noise is was like nails on  a chalkboard , But a big bang and a lock , ran to the big mental gate and it was hovering all over the trees I was locked .My nose starting to bleed and my heart pumped and was frigend for my life , but I thought couldn't breathe with the dust and dirt curling up like a tornado  .I wasn't ready to die oh not today . I knew what my dad worked for , there is something in the rain . The forecast was raining  The sky was cloudy and open wide to the sky. It's a disease in a rain . I started to cry and I lost hope. This was the end . But I remembered I got on my phone , The underground tunnel like for this purpose. The first rain drop started to fall. I wouldn't like much I didn't want to stay , My heart kicked in and I ran. It was so close , as I closed the door underneath , the raindrop fell into the door. I opened my phone and it was a live of my best friend , she said it's raining I love rain < But this didn't stop her it landed right on her skin and she dropped down screaming , I couldn't watch < I dropped my phone and cried my heart away . This was a good place to be in this solution , I got my phone and it was the news “ Everyone stay inside , there is something in the rain under everyone sircomestn you have to stay inside”
I remembered that I left the note on the just hoping my dad will get home . He gets home at 4.00 pm it was 3.30pm I waited and hoped into my shoulder .It was time my dad was home , He looked at it  . I could him scream in horror like he was right next to me.
He got his gear on and ran into the forest and ready to fight anything,I was just drowning myself into my tears,
“ please dad find me “ I said in a whisper , It was a knock on the door , I ran up there in excitement I thought it was my dad . It wasn't , it was someone screaming in horror I couldn't look and shut the door , I just stayed there in my own sorrow . Day after day just in the little underground house. Just waiting and waiting for my dad. But wait what's that …..I rushed down to get my wetsuit on to block the disease. I opened , I saw a yellow suit. I looked at his face, IT was my dad. I screamed and cried on his shoulder and.. I mumbled “ Dad immmm scared , I don't know what to do” I silenced cried . I said “ I miss mum” and wheres Chloe , I looked behind him. He said she's back in the house. I stepped out of the tunnel. My tears fall The next water drop fall.
I said “ Why and what is happening” Dad said “ There's something in the rain, it's a deasne if it touched you , you'll die, you will scream and it will feel like something in your throat, and your body will start to fail.”“ And…. I’m the only one that can fix that.” He started to sob. I rubbed his back as we got back into the house. He gave me a list and I will be back soon and whispered in Chloe's ear “ Don't tell Grace I will be back in around a …….. He walked off and gave the list .

:

Take Chloe to the tunnel. Stay in there until i'm back.There's food. Water. Everything in this house. If someone knocks at the door don't open it! I repeat don't open it .

I hope you enjoyed ,

What do you think about it ?

Make sure to leave a comment and if you ave any questions comment as well!

BYE!