Kia Ora,
Back with activity 10, So last night I said I would do 5 and I do like 2 or 3
So I'm doing this one now and try and do 6 today so I finish the first page of activity as I have slide to mark off all the activities that I have done.
So I will do activity Ten which is:
What I made is defitney is a dessert and not a dinner
or like a food item,
If you have a sweet tooth it could be a snack.
This is a change for me because I normally do like dinner or a snack
Now here is the slide to see it:
Thanks for watching/reading
I hope you enjoyed,
Have you done the spring learning journey ?
Are you going to do it?
Have you enjoyed your holidays so far?
Until next time
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Bye
Hey Grace, its me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the fact that you have done it step by step so that you can see it in the inside as well as the outside and you have created everything yourself.
This reminds me of when I did it but I think I made a soup thing. I think that your one was better and maybe even tastier! While looking through your slides, I almost started drooling because of how tasty it looked!
I think to improve, maybe you could just check through your writing and you sort of asked the same question when you said 'Have you done the Spring Learning Journey' and 'Are you doing it'. But if you just change those it would make it even better because its already great!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteThis looks super yum! Who doesn't like chocolate and ice cream. I know that my daughter would really like this ... she's addicted to sugar.
Thanks for sharing,
Mrs Spragg
Hi there Grace, Its Abby from school here.
ReplyDeleteThat looks good can you make it in real life and not on a slide so I can eat it.
Next time you could think about what else you could add on the last slide.
If you could would you really make this?
I'm also doing the Spring Learning Journey.
Kind Regards,
Abby.