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Friday, June 29, 2018

Newspaper Report!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 So this week we have been doing newspaper reports. On Monday we did newspapers so we come up with a report so my one is "Yaldhurst Model School on lockdown"

so we chose a newspaper report and put the newspaper report in it. It has to be done by next week and we are going to put it together to make a big newspaper. Please, can I have feedback to make my report better THANKS!!!!!!  As well can you please me give me feedback on how my report is looking and how I can make it better 

So this week we have been doing newspaper reports. On Monday we did newspapers so we come up with a report so my one is "Yaldhurst Model School on lockdown"
so we chose a newspaper report and put the newspaper report in it. It has to be done by next week and we are going to put it together to make a big newspaper. Please, can I have feedback to make my report better THANKS!!!!!!  As well can you please me give me feedback on how my report is looking and how I can make it better 





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  1. AnonymousJuly 2, 2018 at 9:22 AM

    Hi Gracie
    Please check your spelling and sentences as some I didn't understand,
    Do you like doing the news paper?

    Well done

    Kind Regards
    Chloe YMS

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    1. AnonymousJuly 3, 2018 at 1:19 PM

      Hi Chloe,
      Thanks for taking the time to comment!!
      Yes I did go back and change some of the sentences because I went through and looked.
      I dint really like reading newspapers but I like writing them,

      Thanks Gracie

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