Kia ora!
This is my free writing I have been doing , it's not done completely but I hope you enjoy.
It's about this haunted hospital and I not sure how to end it at the moment .
Please give a comment to help me improve it.
How do think the ending is going to go and be like?
Whats' your favourite part of the free writing I have been making?
Please say I can improve the title of it or improve the writings.
Thanks Enjoy
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