Long write

Kia ora!
So this is my long write , that I have finished today. This was was the photo that was have to make story out of


I made mine about the series of unfortunate events. This was the start of the story that the teacher gave to us : It was the dead of night.

All that could be heard was the muffled beating of the creature’s enormous wings as it soared through the inky-black sky. Behind it, at the end of a frayed length of rope, sat the coachman. Coat wrapped tightly around his broad shoulders, his mission tonight was a straightforward one: to escort the two strangers to Castle Midnight. It all seemed straightforward to him. Even if it wasn’t, he always did as the Master bade. No one ever dared to disobey the Master, especially on a night such as this…

This was easy to start because they already had something to start it with.

This it :All that could be heard was the muffled beating of the creature’s enormous wings as it soared through the inky-black sky. Behind it, at the end of a frayed length of rope, sat the coachman. Coat wrapped tightly around his broad shoulders, his mission tonight was a straightforward one: to escort the two strangers to Castle Midnight. It all seemed straightforward to him. Even if it wasn’t, he always did as the Master bade. No one ever dared to disobey the Master, especially on a night such as this,

we in the back as people would say  the strangers,

Maddie and I was cooped in the smallest place ever, The mission was the couchman to go back to the castle, But Maddie and I was getting the special sugar bowl they stole and to see what inside the sugar bowl.

The couchman didn't know we are in the back. It was so tight I could feel Maddie breathing on me.

It was time to set the mission it was a dark spooky , hoorified castle.

I stood up after the couchman left, “ CLEAR” I said screaming in a whisper.

The sand felt as it was grabbing onto me and killing my foot. It was like the kettle was boiling over your foot. Maddie stood up and walked to the the petrising jail door.

Now pay attention to the 3 letters i'm going to say “ Please go away.”

It was locked of course it would of been Grace , Maddie said.

I got a grabbing hook and climbed up the tower of nothing but sadness and anger.

The rocks fell as I put my foot into the rockhard wall.

Maddie was behind me.

Before I start to get in the tower I wat to say why I want the sugar bowl and what's in it.

Firstly when our mother and father died inna fire , count olaf the master stole it.

It was a very rare sugar bowl. After my parents died they stole it , from burning down our house as we went out to town to get some things for dinner. Now carry now.

The rock fell into nothing but sand. I got to the top , the master was sleeping it was time to take it my broke the window. Climbed in, in glass. The sugar bowl said on the map is in he under tower. We causality went down the stairs into the underground tower. It was time whats the code , well the first question is what's…..

After I finished the code it was a tattoo on someone's foot behind me one eyebrow, It was count olaf. I got the sugar bowl and Ran past him as he said “ Come here you orphans “ As we were. We slipped down the rope and hoped in the car and the owl liftd, He said yelling out “ I WILL COME FOR YOU ORPHANS , THERE IS NOWHERE TO HIDE” that part was true. But it was time to open it . I lifted the lid, I couldn't bevelive , it's the stolen diamond that was my mums , she discovered back a long time ago.

It was finally mine . Well ours. Wait  where Maddie, Wait count olaf has her, I took put the diamond and put the lid back on, and went and got her we did a trade I gave him the sugar bowl and I got her back even though I took the diamond.

We got home and discovered the diamond even more. Mum would be so happy………

.If she was alive with dad, we didn't have anything we left everything's just for one thing the sugar bowl that we don't have maddie said, but I said we have the diamond.she said you got it  yes I said…… As someone else joined, my eyes were like a waterfall, I was crying because of happy tears, It was mum and dad, They explained everything how they got here, and Maddie and I showed mum the diamond, Mum said “ Yes you found it”

But look how did you find us, “ a little help witht that emous owl…….. And the owl smiled and flyed out……

The end

Whats your favorite part why? How do you think I could of improve it.

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